DIALOGUE REDRAFT

Dialogue:
(Protagonist = Agent Smith  / Second MI5 agent = Agent Johnson)

Smith:      How are you?
Johnson:  I'm fine. One thing led to another, but I'm just glad it's sorted now.
Smith:      'Sorted'?
Johnson:  Yeah, he's dead now.
Smith:      He's still out there.
Johnson:  What?!

2nd Redraft

Johnson:  Glad you can make it.
Smith:       I haven't got much time S, can you hurry it up. You know I'm not supposed to be here
Johnson:   I need you to do one more thing for me, one more mission. (Leaning his hand on Johnson's shoulder then places other hand on Smith's other shoulder) ...She'd want you to do it.
Smith:       She's not here anymore! I quit a long time ago... I'll see ya' S.